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Last night, I went to some live with my hus. It was a jazz concert by Toshiko Akiyoshi, piano solo. I 'd not listened to her play yet, but She is a famous pianist over world-wide,so, was very excited and anticipated. In spite of that, when the live start, I was disappointed so much. The notes were rough, I felt unpleasant. I thought, "she is rather old age, so her fingers started weak." But, in harf of an hour, somehow I was so attracted by her performance. I thought, she had appealed me by her artistic music.

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Last night, I went to a concert with my husband. It was a jazz concert by Toshiko Akiyoshi, the piano soloist. I 'd not listened to her play before, but she is a world-famous pianist, so I was very excited. However, when the concert started, I was so disappointed. The notes were rough and I felt uncomfortable. I thought to myself, "she is rather old, so her fingers have
become
weak." But after about half an hour, I found myself warming to her performance. I felt she had appealed to me through her artistic music.
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