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2002年11月からスタートしたリバティには、TOEFL, IELTS,GRE,GMAT,英検1級や英検準1級、自由英文などに使ってほしいなーと思う沢山の言い回しやフレーズがあります。そこで、表を作ることにしました!左欄には日本人が書きたがる、書いてしまう、ちょっと残念な言い回し、右欄にはネイティブ先生が使うアカデミックな言い回しを載せます。簡単そうに見えますが、実際の試験で使えますか?これらを難なく使えるようになれば、貴方のエッセイはとっても自然でアカデミック、IELTSやTOEFL,GMATなどでも高得点が取れるようになりますよ!

これからどんどん増やしていくので、みなさんのエッセイに使用してみてください。エッセイが変わります。エッセイが自然でアカデミックになります。スコアが上がること間違いありません!これからどんどん増やしますので、是非ご期待くださいね!
番号 家庭問題
日本人の残念な表現 ネイティブの自然でアカデミックな表現
1 Because of modernization Due to modernization
2 people can spend money to…. People can afford to spend money to…….
3 People have to see the reality People have to face the reality
4 problems issues
5 children can join many extra activities. children can be involved in many extra-curricular activities.
6 People say People argue
7 children are by themselves children are alone, children are left alone
8 ……..too ……….as well
9 In addition to …… as well as ………………….
10 keep health stay healthy
11 get stress, feel stress become stressed
12 mentally emotionally
13 parents need to check children require adult supervision
14 do not use it properly misuse
15 the nursery Nursery schools and daycares
16 there are good teachers there are good teachers available
17 children can make many friends Many friends can be made
18 mother and father both parents
19 children can take good education easily the money they earn can be used towards their children’s education.
20 because they are poor due to lack of money
21 a bad effect on the growth of children's……………. a bad effect on the development of children's …………………………
22 a survey carried by a survey performed by
23 working out of the house working outside
24 earn twice as high as single income couples have earn twice as much as single income couples
25 standard lives standard of living
26 sometime children eat anything Sometime children eat things they should not
27 they feel lonely and become a bad person they may feel neglected.
28 housing accidents household accidents
29 In more non-desirable case In worse case scenarios
30 If parents are outside if a parent is not present
31 there is a statictics that there are statistics showing
32 wealthness of their family the wealth of their family
33 the additional money. the extra income
番号 リサイクル問題
日本人の残念な表現 ネイティブの自然でアカデミックな表現
1 negative attitude to recycling negative attitude toward recycling
2 because of wasting products because of waste
3 for the last two decades over the last two decades
4 more wastes dump to our nature more waste will be dumped into nature
5 we can use a battery which could be recycled and rechargeable when we use a battery, we can recycle or recharge it
6 and we don't dump it easily and we do not throw it away
7 Recycling is good to save our environment Having everyone do this is a good way to save our environment
8 our daily life our daily lives
9 we should have responsibilities we should have to be responsible
10 environmental destruction is anticipated to lead to future’s tragedies Environmental destruction is expected to cause future tragedies
11 realize how environments are important realize how important the environment is
12 as common senses as second nature
13 win severe competitions in international economic fields get ahead in international economics
14 should try to avoid these repetitions should try to avoid repeating the same actions
15 purpose of keeping responsibilities toward environments the purpose of saving the environment
16 all over the world worldwide
17 disadvantages to more consciousness of……….. disadvantages to being more conscious of …………………….
18 being too much concern about…………….. being too concerned about………………
19 people pursue the concept the proverb………. people pursue the concept behind the proverb………………
20 lead to lost jobs lead to job loss
21 expand more gaps increase the gap
22 lead to solve the environmental problems lead to solutions for environmental problems
番号 経済問題
日本人の残念な表現 ネイティブの自然でアカデミックな表現
1 keep their wealth in the future improve a country’s wealth in the future
2 countries should seek own ways countries can learn their own ways
3 stable and organized internal conditions stable and organized conditions within the country
4 have education and to grow industries get an education and to develop industries
5 undemocratic politics corrupt politics
6 government should rule laws of education to grow people in the future the government should enforce rules for education to prepare people for the future
7 the gap between …………..is wider the gap between …………...is larger
8 the local people at the cheaper wages the local people at lower wages
9 basic needs have not met basic needs are not being met.
10 the gap is more extended the gap is more extensive
11 The first reason to cause the problem The first reason that contributes to the problem
12 By experiencing them Due to this
13 natural disasters leave huge influence natural disasters largely influence
14 consume unexpected money. need extra money
15 highly difficult extremely difficult
16 willing to challenge willing to try
17 To remove the difference To minimize the difference
18 trace down root courses of the difference trace the root causes of the difference
19 to the countries needed help to the countries needing help
20 teach how to make farms teach how to develop farms
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